Saturday, November 14, 2009

Chapter 57: One Night (Part II)

When last we left Jefgel, they were conversing about movies and favorite bands and being astonished at the fact that Angel worked in wrestling. Plus, Angel was wearing new underwear and I was squirming uncomfortably at the fact that I had written any of this. Today: Jeff nonchalantly admits that he is a musician and Angel has an internal monologue where she marvels about how she has no emotional attachment to Jeff and therefore it's a good idea to start getting frisky with him. Just a warning: that will be a recurring theme. I'm trying to think of a concise tag for that phenomenon. If y'all have any suggestions, please do share.


Chapter 57 – One Night (Part II)

“So look … what do you say we get out of here, take a walk along the pier, and get some ice cream or something?” Jeff said as they finished their meal.

“I’m up for the walk, but not the ice cream. I ate like fifty pounds of crab in there.”

“Who’s counting?”

“My engorged stomach.”

“Engorged … that’s such a romantic word. I’ll have to work that into a song.”

“You write songs?”

“Here and there. Did you like my lame attempt at working that seamlessly into the conversation?”

“Admirable indeed. Do you sing?”

“I try.”

“And play the guitar?”

“Am I that obvious?”

“Nah. Yeah,” she giggled. “Let me guess … you write songs about women.”

“Wrong on that one.”

“So it’s not a lure?”

“Well, I’d be lying if I said it didn’t lure incidentally, but I really just love to play.” [I've already rolled my eyes like 300 times since this chapter started]

“That’s cool. I used to play the violin in junior high. I gave it up when I started forming a chin callus.” [way to suffer for your art, Angel]

Jeff smiled at her and extended his right hand. “These are like my badge of honor,” he said, displaying his callused fingers.

“You know what would have looked just as cool? A humongous one of those on my face.”

Jeff laughed and turned towards her as they leaned on the railing overlooking the water. “Anything marring that face would be a crime,” he said, tracing her jawline with his finger. [uggggg] Angel shivered at his touch. “So, Angel?”

“Yes?”

“I’ve been wanting to kiss you all night.”

“What’s been stopping you?”

He tilted her face up towards his and brought his lips to hers. Angel’s head swam. No one had ever kissed her like this. The second his lips touched hers, everything else ceased to matter—but it wasn’t that she was caught up in love for him, as she had been with Chris, but with such a fierce passion that she could think of nothing else. When the kiss ended, she felt dizzy. [I don't feel so good myself having read that]

“Jeff …”

“Yeah?”

But she didn’t know what to say. The way he was looking at her rendered her speechless. His dark hazel eyes were locked on hers. He looked like he wanted to devour her. She had the distinct feeling that she was looking at him the same way.

“I … uhm …”

“We have the most intense chemistry I’ve ever felt. No joke.”

“Yeah.”

“I mean it. Look. You probably know that I’m no saint. I’ve been around … but this is crazy. The second I touch you, I …”

“Lose track of life?”

“Pretty much. That’s not a line, Angel. I’m speaking the truth here.”

“I know.”

“And you know what’s almost stupid?”

“What?”

“I like you so much that I wouldn’t even consider having a one night stand.”

“You only sleep with people you don’t like?”

“The fifth.”

Angel laughed. “So Jeff ... if I invite you back to my hotel room, I don’t have to worry about you thinking I’m a slut because I know it won’t be with the expectation of sleeping with you on the first non-date.”

“You’re seriously going to tempt me like that?”

“All I’m going to do is invite you back. You have my solemn vow that we will not have sex.”

“This is the weirdest conversation I’ve had in a long time.”

“Is that a yes?”

“Absolutely.”

As they walked back, neither of them spoke, but it wasn’t uncomfortable silence at all. Angel tried valiantly to not think about what she was doing, but she couldn’t help it. What if Jeff had not brought sex up? What if he hadn’t already promised not to sleep with her? How could she possibly tell him that she was a virgin without freaking him out? Was she seriously going back to her hotel room with a guy she barely knew, especially a guy she wanted this badly? Was he actually going to find out she was wearing a thong? That last thought sent shivers down her spine.

“So look, Angel, [awkward PSA alert!] even though we’ve not to have sex and we’ve both pleaded the fifth about all previous relationships, I just want you to know that even though I’ve been around, I’ve always done it safely.”

“Thanks, Jeff. I appreciate you saying that … and I’ve never had unsafe sex either.” Not at a lie at all, Angel thought. And there was really no reason to clarify beyond that. There was little chance she and Jeff would see each other again after this weekend. Why should she ruin a perfectly good night with awkward conversation, especially when they’d already agreed not to have sex?

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NOTES:

1) Gee, Angel, I don't know, why WOULD you ruin a good night with conversation? Why would you try to get to know someone a little bit better before inviting him back to your hotel room?

2) As smarmy as Jeff is, I don't quite want to punch him in the solar plexus just yet. Let's look at this from his perspective: he's a total hottie and he knows it. There's a hot blonde nurse looking to rebound. Everything he's doing and saying is totally in character. The only icky thing is that the hot nurse in question is Angel. He doesn't know that yet, readers. I actually feel kind of sorry for him at this point.

3) Don't you wish that Dustin had been eating at that restaurant too?

COMING UP NEXT ...

Avert your eyes, readers. It gets sort of steamy. I might actually have to tone it down a little, because otherwise I wouldn't be able to make eye contact with those of you whom I know in person. We'll see.

Tune in next time for ...

Chapter 57: One Night (Part III)

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